Friday, November 11, 2005

head to head

tantalizing brown eyes
lips so desperate
but not yet.

2 Comments:

Blogger KFH said...

what kind of poems are these short ones? i tried to figure out some kind of syllable pattern, but couldn't...maybe i missed it tho! just curious! i like em tho.

12:01 PM  
Blogger kileyd said...

i'd love to expirement with syllabic patterns--but i'm not ready. for right now i'm trying my luck with three line poems that follow no rules or patterns, and simply are an echo of the short, sporadic poetic experiences i am only beginning to notice in my daily life. three lines is such a small space, but so difficult to fill. i'm thinking of some sort of series though...

1:07 AM  

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